How to Write a remarkable College Essay

How to Write a remarkable College Essay

Applying for college is a stressful experience as the pressure of being good enough looms over your head. You’re trying to maintain your GPA, and possibly clubs or other extracurricular to add to your resume.

Maybe you also work a part-time job, too. Smart Tutor have to also figure out how to write the perfect college essay. No worries – if you follow these steps, you are sure to write a great college essay that will help you to stand out from your competitors.

Be personable, not too formal

You want to sound professional, but not too formal. The college admissions committee is going to be reading thousands of college essays that sound exactly the same. People will be listing their GPA, and the clubs that they participated in and the positions that they held.

Many think that sounding as prestigious as possible will be the most impressive, and yes, that information is important in regards to your admission, but they want to see your personality shine throughout the essay.

Get them from the first line

The first line can make or break your essay. Just simply saying, “My name is ____ and I’m a senior at _____ high school with a 3.7 GPA” won’t draw them in. They have heard that same line thousands of times, and they will see all of that information in your initial application.

This is your chance to stand out. Just like a story, you can use the first sentence to keep them wanting to read further instead of feeling obligated to.

Include something unique

Everyone has something unique to them in their walk of life, so utilize that. The admissions committee wants to learn more about you as an individual in your essay rather than restating what is already on your application. There will be many other people with a similar GPA and other credentials, so this is your chance to be unique amongst those other applicants.

Have a true passion

Are you truly passionate about attending college, and specifically, the one that you are applying to? College committees can tell if you truly want to attend their school or not.

The passion (or lack of) will scream through the paper at them. You should only be applying if you truly picture yourself attending that school. After all, you will be there for the next four years.

Not your parents, not your friends (well, maybe some), but this is your life and future. Make sure you want to do this!

State your purpose for your declared major, and what you plan to do with it

State your purpose for your declared major, if you have one. This will show the admissions committee what exactly you plan to do with your degree after college and what your impact will be in the world. Showing your true interest and plans for the future will impress them.

Include something about the college, to show genuine interest in that school

If you mention something that you know or love about the college, they will love that. It shows that they’re not just another college to you, but the college that you truly want to attend and picture yourself being at for the next four years. 

If your GPA is lacking, state why and why you think that you should still attend the school

If your GPA is lacking, this is your chance to briefly explain why. You don’t want to make the whole essay about this, as they will want to learn more about you, but do include why your GPA is less than what they typically admit.

Schools do admit students with a lower GPA based on things like their extracurricular for example, but they need to make sure that you will be able to maintain your GPA in college.

Double check for grammar

Double (or triple) check for adequate grammar usage. The college admissions committee will notice spelling mistakes, misplaced commas and more (this especially applies if your major will be in a journalism or English field, but is still important for all applicants).

Have people proof-read, ideally a professional

Have a friend, a parent, or a tutor proof-read your work. Your essay may sound great to you, or you may not notice any grammatical errors, but others may see something that you don’t.

It’s so important to get a second (or third) opinion on your work, so that you can get an outsider’s point of view. A tutor can be a great professional asset when it comes to helping you with your college essay, and Miles Smart Tutoring can provide the perfect one for you.